Tuesday, 21 September 2010

Essay 1 Feedback

Low level 3 - Roughly equates to a high C.
The essay offers a clear balance of media theories with a proficient attempt at personal engagement. A clear structure is developed in response to the question. Answer informed by theory with some reference to contemporary examples.

To develop essay: Mention Karl Marx, provide more examples i.e. Madonna, X Factor etc. To improve essay writing skills: Work with me on posing questions in an essay.

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